Idea development / New narrative shots

After viewing our narrative and band shots together on Premier Pro and showing it to one of our teachers we realised that our video was lacking excitement as nothing really happened and people weren't understanding that the first person they saw with the band wasn't actually in the band. So we had a group discussion and decided that we would need to develop our idea further.

Our new idea, which is still linked to our previous one of jealousy, is to have our narrative shots showing the progression of a 'super fan' who is obsessive and has loads of posters of the band (could be seen as a stalker). The shots will show how her love of Paramore builds up to a point where she is seen with posters of the band all over her wall like a shrine. We would then have normal band shots of the band running through the video as well.

To avoid having the band shots in our school gym we went location scouting the other day and found some run down areas which could be potential places to have as a location for our band shots. Locations we found were:

 A boiler room 

A run down garden